General-D's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Celebration (Short)]

Meh

[Madness - Retribution]

Epic animation

[Madness Celebration]

Epic

You're kinda early tho

[INCIDENT:2003kl PART 2]

powerpoint presentation

[Madness:Black Berserk trailer]

Cool thing you got there

The mask size is wack, front and side views don't match

Addition of mouths is weird but ok

BlackholeStudios responds:

Belive me,mouths are gonna play a big role in this animation

[Madness Siryn Experiment]

This is pretty good
Just look at other animations and see what you're missing
And then just animate, that way you'll improve I guess

[Vane vs Dangea ( Short Preview )]

Some awesome stuff my dude

BestofNesia responds:

Thanks!

[Incident 206A]

It's ok

Were sprites made in paint or something?

[Madness Monsterfication 2]

It's.. Ok I guess.
The lack of bullet tracers makes it really confusing at times.
The story is lacking imo. Typos sometimes make the sentences have no meaning and the villain that appeared out of nowhere is kinda lame. You could have added forshadowing or something else to make the villain have motivation to attack the protagonist, but right now it's kind of a super powerful entity that appeared out of nowhere that decided to just fuck with one random dude for no reason.

juanford66 responds:

yeah i know, im not happy at all with the result,(issues of improvising the story), if you look it on that way it even sounds like a bit of a clitche, but i think i can improve it for the next part. thanks for the review aniways.